Amanuensis ([info]amanuensis1) wrote in [info]death_note,

FICLET: "A Shinigami Fable" by Amanuensis

A Shinigami Fable
Author: [info]amanuensis1
Summary: The Shinigami have begun to tell stories. ~650 words.

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The realm of the Shinigami is not what it was. As Death Gods, its inhabitants are hardly worthy of the name. Sloth Gods, more aptly. Oh, occasionally they remember to write a human name or two in their books in order to continue their decayed existence. But for the most part Shinigami lie about, or gamble, or sleep.

But recently they have begun to tell stories.

"Bright he was, like the morning star, and he dazzled the Shinigami from all that distance, so that the Shinigami let the Death Note fall from his hands into the hands of the bright one. And he was Lucifer, or, in the more common tongue, Light."

("Oh, balls. It didn't happen that way at all," Ryuk snorts, crunching away at his apple.)

"And with the Note, Light the Morningstar became the Deathbringer. He had lost his balance, so another was forced to rise to complete him and bring him back to balance. Because he was the second half of the Morningstar, his name was also Lucifer, shortened to L for ease."

("He was a misfit human who was more than a little batshit himself, you idiots." Ryuk picks a bit of apple skin from between his knife-blade teeth. "Those eyes. You think my eyes are scary? Ha.")

"Together they might have achieved balance. But then she came, and Light was torn further from balance because she desired him and wanted to be his completion. And she is always named twice, 'Misa, Misa,' for she was the beloved of not one but of two Shinigami, and we honor her for that."

("Can't think why." Ryuk swallows. "She wasn't nearly as interesting as some humans. Rem was a worse weakling than Gelus was, you ask me. What are we honoring weak Shinigami for?" "Ssssh," hisses one of the listening Death Gods.)

"Because she had been twice-loved by the Shinigami and twice-gifted with their Eyes, Misa, Misa could no longer see as well with her human eyes, and so could not see that L was the other half of Light, and could not love him."

("Nobody loved him. He had to handcuff himself to people to get dates. Doesn't that tell you something?" Ryuk cackles.)

"So Lucifer remained sundered. And the half of him known as L passed from that world, and the other half, Light, remained the Deathbringer, for Misa, Misa could not complete him. And those who recalled the glory of the Morningstar despaired, for only the Deathbringer earned worship in the human world."

("Humans eat dirt and they crap worship," Ryuk sniggers. "Most of them wouldn't know a real god if they...well, if they touched a friggin' Death Note.")

"Wisdom had not completed Light. Nor had love. It remained that only innocence could do this. And so the one who came to him as a little child held a mirror to what remained of Lucifer, and when Light saw himself reflected he was completed. But he could not stay in the human world, and passed beyond it to join his other half."

("Are you giving that other little weirdo credit for my kill? Are you shitting me?" howls Ryuk. "I wrote his name in my Death Note! He was mine by right! What are all of you doing, babbling your stupid stories and forgetting the rules of Shinigami?" He turns away from those gathered. "I can't take you assholes any longer. I'm going.")

"Meanwhile the human world waits. Waits for another, bright as Lucifer, who will dazzle a Shinigami and claim a Death Note, yet not be sundered. It is said that when that happens, Shinigami and human realm will become one, and who can say which of us, of them, will be gods in their true realm on that day."

"The realms become one," murmur some of the listeners.

"True gods," others whisper in fear.

Only one has a question. "Where," he puzzles, "exactly is Ryuk getting all those apples?"

No one answers him. Certainly not Ryuk.
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[info]atalantapendrag

July 8 2008, 00:26:00 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, excellent! I was giggling all the way through, and it works.

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 00:27:25 UTC 3 years ago

*giggles too* Can't have Death Note without symbolism.

[info]reddwarfer

July 8 2008, 00:41:11 UTC 3 years ago

I fucking love you. LOVE. Love. Love. Your Ryuk is fucking precious.

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 00:51:14 UTC 3 years ago

(Oh, god, your icon--I love that moment in the credits!)

Ryuk is such a delight. I'm not surprised that he insisted on being in my first substantial piece of DN fanfic. :D

[info]reddwarfer

3 years ago

[info]selve

July 8 2008, 01:05:36 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, this is awesome! I love the lofty language and the overblown symbolism (I somehow see Armonia Jastin as the narrator) and Ryuk's perfectly IC commentary. Beneath the silliness, it's actually quite thought-provoking and poetic.

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 01:18:25 UTC 3 years ago

The voice in my head doing the storytelling is female for some reason, though I have no visual for her/him. I love that it gave you a visual right away! And, yes, you have it exactly--I couldn't imagine the symbolism being put into words without Ryuk laughing his immortal ass off at the pretentiousness. :D Thank you so much!

[info]ryuaka

July 8 2008, 01:33:51 UTC 3 years ago

Awesome Fable

I love the Allusions

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 01:41:57 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Awesome Fable

They just kind of...came! But they needed Ryuk's voice to say, "All well and good, but don't think it's profound or anything." :D Thank you!

[info]ryuaka

3 years ago

[info]ryuaka

3 years ago

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3 years ago

[info]ryuaka

3 years ago

[info]dementedsiren

July 8 2008, 02:01:11 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, Ryuk. There needs to be more Ryuk fic, there really does.

(BTW, awesome. I was cracking up.)

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 02:13:24 UTC 3 years ago

Ryuk is awesome. His voice is so much fun to write! How can there not be tons of Ryuk fic, I ask you. And thank you so much! :D

[info]lawliette

July 8 2008, 02:05:30 UTC 3 years ago

Absolutely brilliant. I'm really quite taken...I hope you develop this more!

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 02:15:46 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, my god, your icon's so adorable my toes are curled. :D

Thank you so much! Ryuk's particularly fun to write, isn't he. Hee.

[info]nishi_shinji

July 8 2008, 02:08:49 UTC 3 years ago

I. love. you. For serious. You + Death Note = Awesome. I'm going to start some kind of petition for you to write L/Light.

(This is [info]nishizono by the way)

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 02:17:24 UTC 3 years ago

Nishi darling! *smooches* Believe me, there's L/Light brewing, though it's mostly behind-the-scenes angst, but it really wants to get out. Oh, how I love the Light/L two-way obsession. *smooches you again for good measure*

[info]tekalynn

July 8 2008, 03:11:27 UTC 3 years ago

SQUEE!

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 10:17:09 UTC 3 years ago

Hee! I am thrilled to make you squee!

[info]obnoxdwfanbrat

July 8 2008, 03:30:02 UTC 3 years ago

AHAHAH. Brilliant. Fic that involves changes in the shinigami world is always win. :DDDD

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 13:02:28 UTC 3 years ago

There is so much potential story about the Shinigami realm, you know? :D Thank you so much!

[info]bastblack

3 years ago

[info]myjulien

July 8 2008, 08:22:41 UTC 3 years ago

Memorying. How awesome!

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 13:02:53 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, nifty, thank youuuuu!

[info]irrivexed

July 8 2008, 10:44:59 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, that was fabulous! I too am Light/L two-way obsession fan and the way you represented it was really creative and unique! And Ryuk's running commentary was hilarious (and very apt). The Misa Misa part (loved by two shinigamis) was great! Way to go, super hoping to see more fic from you!

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 13:04:11 UTC 3 years ago

Eee, so glad you liked! The Misa Misa part might have been the first thing that put me in mind of telling it as a lofty fable. Thank you so much!

[info]scratchmist

July 8 2008, 11:05:29 UTC 3 years ago

Thought-provoking and funny in the perfect amounts. ^^ It was able to make the tale of Death Note seem more mystical than the original, but Ryuk kept it lighthearted with his commentary (you got his POV spot on, by the way). Absolutely gold. And I love the idea of L and Light being each other's halves. XD

I'm not sure exactly about who came to him as a child, though. ^^x Is it Near? And Near-as-a-smaller L, or Near-who-is-literally-somewhat a kid? XD Sorry if I'm reading it all wrong.

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 13:08:22 UTC 3 years ago

That was definitely Near! Near, who might be called child-like, with his toys and his unworldliness--though it's a big misread of the Shinigami to mistake that for "innocence," which is part of what pisses off Ryuk. ^_^ Sorry if that was confusing; it just felt expository and overdone to have either the fable narrator or Ryuk state Near's name, which is why he's just "that other little weirdo" to Ryuk. I'm so happy you liked this despite that confusion, thank you so very much! :D

[info]mtranc3

July 8 2008, 11:46:01 UTC 3 years ago

When I saw your name I did a double take, it's so wonderful that you're writing in this fandom! I loved it, especially Ryuk's voice, it was spot-on, a lovely fable. Please write more!

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 13:43:41 UTC 3 years ago

I'm so obsessed with DN right now. :D I'm so happy you liked this, thank you!

[info]versipellis

July 8 2008, 12:01:21 UTC 3 years ago

I love the balance of the high-flown fable plus Ryuk's snarky commentary! And the way you mythicised the story worked really well. I especially liked Misa being named twice :D

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 13:44:50 UTC 3 years ago

The Misa-named-twice thing may have been the first thing that came to me and inspired this. ^_^ It was such fun to do! Thank you so much!

[info]bastblack

3 years ago

[info]ojuzu

July 8 2008, 14:19:12 UTC 3 years ago

In a million years or so (give or take a few thousand) this will definitely be the sacred tale of the Shinigami. Or something. Meanwhile, Ryuk will continue to tell everyone that IT DIDN'T HAPPEN LIKE THAT.

Nobody knows where Ryuk gets his apples. Maybe he orders them online.

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 15:11:38 UTC 3 years ago

*giggles and giggles* And I keep imagining Ryuk's temper tantrums! Thank you so much, what a great review! :D

[info]serria

July 8 2008, 17:44:49 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, amazing! I love all of the poetic, reverent words for such a human occurrence - makes me wonder what kinds of crazy things in this world will one day be told like that. Ryuk was great, too. :D

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 18:36:05 UTC 3 years ago Edited:  July 8 2008, 18:36:24 UTC

Oh, you sweetheart, thank you! Hee, Ryuk was particularly fun. I'm so glad you liked this! :D

[info]persephone_blue

July 8 2008, 19:07:28 UTC 3 years ago

I love your endings. Also, Ryuk's interjections within the fable are enjoyable.

[info]amanuensis1

July 8 2008, 19:13:55 UTC 3 years ago

I like the bewildered guy at the end drawing everyone's attention to evidence Ryuk is still messing about on a regular basis! The story under the story, if you will. Thank you so much! :D

[info]kalium_kx

July 9 2008, 08:55:45 UTC 3 years ago

This is some really interesting perspective..

[info]amanuensis1

July 9 2008, 12:53:45 UTC 3 years ago

I enjoy turning mundane language into something fairy-tale-esque. And Ryuk helped me to keep it balanced! :D

[info]kalium_kx

3 years ago

[info]themostepotente

July 10 2008, 13:41:36 UTC 3 years ago

ILU because you share in my new obsession. ILU because you love Ryuk as much as I do. But mostly, I just LU.

*hearts*

Now, where's the nasty Light/L porn? *G*

[info]amanuensis1

July 12 2008, 00:26:45 UTC 3 years ago

ILU ILU ILU three times over too!

I didn't write this one, but maybe this will do for now? What I'd Do, by Empress of the Eclipse. YUM.

[info]ariadneelda

July 13 2008, 20:21:27 UTC 3 years ago

Eee! This was awesome! Ryuk's commentary WINS. He was just so perfect.

I hope you write more DN fic! Btw, have you found any good fic you might recommend me? (Already bookmarked the one you linked to above. ^_^)

[info]amanuensis1

July 16 2008, 06:19:58 UTC 3 years ago

I'm so happy you liked it! God, Ryuk was fun to channel. :D

I'm starting to go through some links to DN fic--do you want pairing fic exclusively?

[info]bellavaruka

July 18 2008, 22:44:39 UTC 3 years ago

:D

Yay DN ficlet! You know, you're the reason I got into Death Note. My friends have watched it for years and I'd seen the first episode and was like "eh" but as soon as you started proclaiming how great it was, and since I'm such a fan of yours, I gave it another shot. Glad I did, although I'm afraid I'm one of the silly people that didn't enjoy it anymore after episode 26. ^^;

[info]amanuensis1

July 19 2008, 14:35:47 UTC 3 years ago

Re: :D

Ah ha ha, I got you into the fandom! I win, I win! :D But, oh, I don't think you're silly at all. The back arc is grim and makes you miss L horribly, but my take on it is that it's grim and unhappy because it's the world of Kira's doing. He made his unhappy bed, now he's lying in it. And I feel that that's the point of the back arc.

[info]painless_j

August 19 2008, 10:12:49 UTC 3 years ago

And she is always named twice, 'Misa, Misa,' for she was the beloved of not one but of two Shinigami, and we honor her for that.

...

Because he was the second half of the Morningstar, his name was also Lucifer, shortened to L for ease.[...]

"Those eyes. You think my eyes are scary? Ha."


Hahahaha!

Answers all my questions, it really does! :)

[info]amanuensis1

August 19 2008, 10:45:12 UTC 3 years ago

Hee! Glad you read, thank you! And now I don't have to pester you. *pets* :D

[info]the_gabih

May 25 2009, 16:08:30 UTC 3 years ago

*giggles*

Aww... gotta love Ryuk, especially his reaction to Near's part in the story.

[info]amanuensis1

June 6 2009, 21:29:14 UTC 2 years ago

I'm so fond of Ryuk. When I finished watching Death Note, his viewpoint was the one that most demanded fic from me, hee.
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